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Justin K at 2007-10-20

Thank you Kevin, i will try to modify my poems to have that sort of thing :)

Melvin LeVeque ( F C D ) at 2007-10-30

Yes, ty this helped me

Rachel at 2007-11-08

I read this i want to do exactly that bur i find it relle hard to describe what im feeling inside without blately saying it... is this something that u are talking about?

the darkness of the lonely night
seeps through the window
the curtains blowing back and forth
chirps from the ouside crawl through the cracks
alone in the blackness
bitter cold
desperately sad.

ss at 2008-01-16

I read this but im afraid im missing the point...

Relaxed and listless; utterly bare
The dripping silence; opressive air
A shocking shadow; into the night
Curling trails disturbed; the haze takes flight

tiffyKat at 2008-02-19

I have been noticing that in others people's writing, but i haven't been quite able to put my finger on how to change my thought process when writing....or even go back to a poem and modify it with this very process....

this helps me trememdously.

thank you

tiffanyKatherine.

vanessa at 2008-05-14

I really want to write my poems in a subtle way, but i just can't get the right words. Can you help me out? or are there any other tips you can give?

Nz0 ( F C D ) at 2008-07-06

Well iv always found that no matter how obvious the point is, it should b more rated on how it makes u feel once it has been read.
still i will be attempting to right some poems in this more cryptic style and c how it pans out for me =)