I know I have quite a few poems, but it would be great to get some comments on some of my earlier work too..? I like helpful critique, though not nasty ones, so be honest, but be tactful!! :-) If all else fails, my featured poems are probably the ones I like the most :-) |
Through my window, I can see
A world that isn't pleasing me...
Friendship is something that cannot be broken.
Honesty's wanted, but often unspoken...
The rain is falling down on me
But only silver raindrops fall...
Lying on concrete, the flower thrives.
New hope, every time strangers walk by...
Quietly, she walks alone,
And gently tilts her head...
Your whole Facebook is filled with her.
You profile pictures, reels...
I get it. When you're in a mess,
No contact can be good...
Cheers to the ex for the ticket.
Certainly not a ticket to ride...
So here's the thing.. if I want to write,
I don't need permission, it's not your right...
It's always you. You're always there.
My life without you in it...
Missed for a lifetime; |
Sooner or later, everything needs to be dealt with. The longer it's left, the worst the repercussions, the sooner, the longer there is to adapt; move on. |
Just because you hide over the hill to cry, |