Karl Wild ( F P C D )
at 2009-10-19
I felt this was a very unique poem, although dark and mysterious it wasn't boring or sloppy. The flow was well down and the imagery I felt was perfect. I could invision every word/thought and I could almost feel the pain within the words. Excellent job 5/5
suicidalkansas ( F P C D )
at 2009-10-20
I got a good image off your poem.. It was well written and had excellent flow throughout the entire poem.. Karl pretty much said it all above. Wonderful job. It kept me hooked throughout the entire thing.. Good job 5/5
Demonic Inferno ( F P C D )
at 2009-10-20
Great job very descriptive dark and gloomy packed with dark emotion created a lot of imagery just what i like :) thanks for writing this crafty piece
Rainbow Dreaming ( F P C D )
at 2009-10-23
I've never read anything of yours before but after this dark piece you'll see my name more often. It was chilling and your word choice was perfect. Good luck with the nomination. My votes are depleted for this week
Raindrops ( F P C D )
at 2009-10-25
*whistles* i have never seen a descriptvness about a personal nightmare quite like that man. Very Descriptive, i actually saw what you where looking at and felt the sorrow weave in and out of the melodic word flow
Amazing job
~Raindrops
5/5
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