Dixiedaisy ( F P C D )
at 2009-10-23
WOW!
This was definitely a deep write. I love how you added the fact that is was not a drug induced trip. It's merely your mind playing the tricks and makes you wonder if you are psychotic. Great Job on the write.
Take Care,
Kay
Karl Wild ( F P C D )
at 2009-11-05
This one I have to be honest was a little sloppy and made completely no sense. I'm not sure if it was meant to be that way because this was all in your head and not the readers or if you just didn't get across what you were trying to say? I thought about it for a few minutes and I'm guessing its supposed to be all messed up haha as thoughts often are. It's definately tough to fathem what our thoughts often mean especially if we think we're going crazy. Great work with this piece it was very twisted and unusual 5/5
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