Wolf ( F P D )
at 2009-11-03
This poem is kina of cathchy.
I like the way that it was worded.
It has a nice tune to go with the poem.
This is better than the things that I write.
*honestly*
5/5
DreamOfOlwin ( F P C D )
at 2009-11-06
I found this poem very captivating... enchanting to read! Great use of vocabulary.. and yes, catchy. Well written, and expressed :)
Ray Smallshaw ( F P C D )
at 2009-11-11
The first stanza seems a bit off as most people think of witch's as evil, and if you are going to lead someone astray well I would not mind a trip to paradise if you understand were I am coming from. The poem though has great meter and pulls you along with it spirited flow, must be a good witch's song. Excellent Ray S 5/5
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