Comments

Quiet Insanity ( F C D ) at 2009-11-01

A fantastic poem , dark and chilling. No to bad for not having a full moon LOL
awesome job

Paul Hirst ( F P C ) at 2009-11-01

Well its full monn tonight in the uk, dont know about Canada, but its a vampire poem and i love them, cool stuff xp

Jackie ( F C ) at 2009-11-02

An excellent poem Fran, erotically dark.5/5

Tony ( C ) at 2009-11-02

Great poem Fran, not sure if it should go in the dark or erotic sections. Hot stuff!

Sea2Summit at 2009-11-07

Metaphorically symbolic. Very nice verse. I like your bite!

Mysterious Charmer ( F C ) at 2009-11-07

My my what a piece you've conjured up here. I've always loved reading poems about vampires...it's always so amusing to see all the different pieces others come up with. And yours is quite amazing! I found myself wrapped up in your words as if I were the mortal being...comforted by your deadly embrace. Fantastic write! This piece is a Gem!


Take care,
Mysterious Charmer

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