Wow. amazing story in poem...
i like this line...

Have you tried seeing beauty when light is not outside?
Not seeing a face, is it hard to decide?

a meaningful part of your poem...but, we should not look for the beauty in outside appearance..the most important is the inner beauty of a person...

i like this...great work!

"Have you tried seeing beauty when light is not outside?
Not seeing a face, is it hard to decide?"

Like for me i wonder have you ever tried to really understand importance of things when there is no obvious reason, have you ever seen something so beautiful and been unable to stop staring, and thinking about her/him.

I love this piece your poetry is heartfelt <3

Wow :) amazingly written 5/5 loved it and lo ed reading it

Wow, I loved reading it, 100/100, your writing is so inspiring, amazing poem