Comments : Yellow Brick Road

  • 9 years ago

    by Amberinaa

    Wow, completely different from anything I have read. So creative, and I love the flow of the rhymes!! xo

  • 9 years ago

    by DarkNDangerous

    This is so amazing. Great topic, epic poem! :)

    ~AloneNHurt

  • 9 years ago

    by Kakera

    This one was very odd -- nay, surreal! And that's a great thing! It feels like I'm reading the nightmares I had as a child that children's stories perverted by a twisted childhood gave -- but not in the uncomfortable way either. I really can't put into words how I feel about this poem, but I like it a lot, truly.

  • 9 years ago

    by Brittany Klein

    Amazing poem! Love the mystery behind it! and love how it is telling you a different way about the Oz!! Great Job!

    *~BrittBratt~*