Comments : Nightmares and Brain Surgery

  • 9 years ago

    by Darren

    Judges comments

    Anybody who can rhyme emergency and surgery gets my vote. Rhyming poems get a bad press on this site and are mostly overlooked because people cannot do them well. This works well and is well written, there is no forced rhyming, each word works at the end of the sentence it hasn't been plonked there to help the rhyme. Its a nice little tale that is written well. 4 points.