I wasn't at all surprised at this winning the contest, it was very well put together and it flowed well, which is very hard to master sometimes when you try and combine so many different prompts.

I thought the tone of the poem was kept well throughout and I did not find myself losing interest or finding errors or stumbles along the way.

I like the story type narration, it made it interesting and made me want to follow right on to find out where the story was going and where it ended.

You used some really good wording outwith the prompts, especially in your opening verse, you used such powerful wording here which really grabbed my attention and gave the poem lots more detail.

I think the title you picked was very well chosen, it fitted the poem well and you done a great job merging all the prompts within.

Well done.