Comments : The Hookman

  • 9 years ago

    by -Choke-On-MY-Halo-

    Centering it would've worked better my dear also there were some slight errors but that's all I see nice poem

    -Bet

  • 9 years ago

    by Marvellous

    A turn-table of deep meanings. Indeed, much thoughts hide in silence. Silence itself hangs like darkness. Always glad to have you share more. There's still somewhere known as FORWARD; keep bleeding your inks, till you're there! A comely attempt, nonetheless..