Comments : Incubus

  • 9 years ago

    by Liz

    Creepy. (I like it)
    I like the dream-like feel to it.

    I've missed reading your work. I apologize for not having a better comment. Just letting you know that whenever I do log on I always look for your stuff. :)

  • 9 years ago

    by Dancing Rivers

    Beautiful, descriptive and sensual rather than sexual piece, this poem is written incredibly well, with a flawless format that helps the continuation of an easy, relaxed flow, also then adding to that sensual feel of the poem, if this poem were summed up in one word, out would be "foreplay" for that is the imagery acquired in reading this poem.well done on an excellent work