Very happy your posting sweet one!!!! This poem is out of this world!!!!!!

Very cutting edge poem, well executed, the seperate but together lines work really well in this poem, in any other poem they may have been a huge risk but you've pulled it off on this one, really awesome :-)

Welcome to PnQ Arrabella! Another dark poem I chose to highlight this week.... Her word usage is so delightful in this poem that it makes the reader want to read it over and over again. Taking emotions and placing it into a good read is difficult and this talented lady did just that... Love the ending!! She has unique and colorful, along with tasteful metaphors in this poem ... really enjoyed this poem!!