Nice poem...

Since I've never read the book I have read some books by that author again I haven't read the book so let me interpret what you wrote alright?

First off you don't have to use so many "I"s hun you really don't you put what you meant trust me in one long stanza you don't have to put so many of them.
Second you didn't have to capitalize so many of the words you wanted since we know what you meant hun
Thirdly I have a slight problem with one of the sentences hun in the poem "But I am lost," there's so many other ways of making that sentence be more beautiful and it should flow better besides that I loved the poem I enjoyed how dark it was, loved the quotations, here's one more critic comment is about the commas they should be sometimes moved in your poem it's still a beautiful poem either way 5/5

-Mori

No problem hun take care and message me if you need me