Cassie, this poem holds a lot of beautiful imagery and great English wording, which I believe works well here. You kind of built up that great dark vibe here. With the wind howling and the characters voice brings it all together nicely. This person seems to be spell bound by Satan and it even seems like you gave your soul to him in exchange for love, but everyone knows the devil always has tricks up his sleeve and tricked you into him your soul. And in return when you die you will spend the afterlife in hell because of a mistake you made in your past. 5/5