LMAO
Oh my god i read this poem in like 5 ways and kept going... Is she talking about??? No.. Wait... What? lol.

aha. It made me laugh but i love corny things.

I like how you kept it light with the rhyme scheme it worked quite well, for this at least, and it was cute! And it was very fast paced which added to the silliness of it. Its funny how well you can place words and make something ALMOST dirty so many times so quickly, and i love how you moved so freely in this. I love the feel, like your still alive almost like your on the hunt but you still get that dark feel from it.

Lol.....I love it!!!!!! You got the hidden meanings quite well! Well done, Gigggggles glad you enjoyed... Its fun to write in metaphors...