Comments : Most Ghosts

  • 9 years ago

    by gumshuda

    Why, this is a beautiful poem... It's amazing.
    I love it.

    Though there was this one thing... Only one thing that kind of interrupted me.. This line:

    "Never let them out of sight."

    I suggest you make this sentence a little longer.. Add a word of two or three syllables..
    Cause well, your entire poem.. Every line... I noticed... Has eight nine or ten syllables, so it is just a little weird to have a short sentence in the between...

    Wonderful poem.