Comments : Sugar ain't sweet

  • 9 years ago

    by Fenix Flight

    Wow This poem is Amazing I'm speachless! I.. I dont really know how to descibe it but I;ll try. I get a sence of depression, or someone going down a dark and twisted path at full speed. The picture it paints is so vivid.

    Truly amazing Deffenitly goin on my favorite list. 100/100

  • 9 years ago

    by little one

    You have a lot of talent and I can definitely relate to you writings.