Comments : Rain Of Fire

  • 8 years ago

    by Linda

    I like this. I'm impressed by this, actually. The rhyming doesn't feel forced anywhere, but at the same time the syllables are almost unorganized so it doesn't have a tapping rhythm, but it's easy to read, even without a syllabic beat to it. This is an interesting structure.

    • 8 years ago

      by Damien

      Sorry for the late reply lol. But thanks it had actually been a few years before I had wrote that one. It's like comeback season lol