Comments : The Dark African Princess

  • 9 years ago

    by Ehly Spears

    Any likes?

  • 9 years ago

    by Ehly Spears

    Any likes?

  • 9 years ago

    by -Choke-On-MY-Halo-

    I definitely like this poem, it's stunning only thing I didn't like was that some "I"s were capitalized and some were not, if you go back to fix that little problem it's going to be amazing! Also I don't think this belongs in the dark category I think it goes under miscellaneous since it's iffy to any category but that one! Have fun fixing it.

    Also I loved the imagery for a beginner it's adorable.

    Anyways have a nice day! 5/5

    -Mori

  • 9 years ago

    by Ehly Spears

    Thank u Mori, I'll take my time to fix those mistakes