Comments : Confession

  • 8 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Oh dear, Hazel; things really aren't good at the moment are they? Another angry poem, full of resentment and dare I say hate?
    But - as always - very well written and really pleasingly laid out,
    Well done and all the best,
    Ben

  • 8 years ago

    by Mr. Darcy

    Hello Hazel,

    as Ben says, this is well written and creatively set out to single out certain words. This gives them more emphasis and creates a thumping beat through the poem. I like the anger, it spits out venomous words of scorn.

    Well done.

    Take care,

    Michael