Comments : Smoke & Mirrors (Double Tetractys)

  • 8 years ago

    by Maple Tree

    Awesome! Im happy I inspired you Michael!

    This is wonderful.... sad and in depth .... wonderful!!

    (small type perhaps? rupture = ruptured ?)

  • 8 years ago

    by Mr. Darcy

    Thank you Andrea, I will amend the typo right away!

  • 8 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    I keep telling Ingrid but she never listens so I will try to persuade you to do the right thing and stop making up forms, Michael. I could almost accept it, but you seem to be laying the blame at Andrea's feet for some twisted idea of what you call inspiration......:)
    IN ALL SERIOUSNESS.......wonderful, disciplined writing from you here, Michael. I have done enough research to know how difficult this form is and you have done a great job here, and kept the story rigid. Have you been made a cuckold again, Michael? Leave her, man.
    Wonderful - you've hit a purple patch today!
    Ben

    • 8 years ago

      by Mr. Darcy

      Lovely comment Ben. To be honest sometimes it's just fun to just have a go. Back to work tomorrow, so it'll be the 'Q' word from me! lol

      Thanks Ben.

  • 8 years ago

    by PETER EDWARDS

    Clever wording here Michael, and yes some cuckolding inferences?! lol!
    Seriously, nice work.

    • 8 years ago

      by Mr. Darcy

      We would loose so much creative material if it was not for 'cuckolding' lol
      Thanks for taking time to read my efforts.

  • 8 years ago

    by Cindy

    Michael I love dark poetry. This one is great. Nice job on the form.
    Take care
    Cindy
    ~ hugs~