Comments : Retribution

  • 5 years ago

    by Mr. Darcy

    Not a single comment before this one.

    I've just read this medieval themed story. You told it well. I could visualise each scene, like it was a film.

    Somehow, though, I thought the poison was going to kill our brave knight after he won the fight? Did you ever think about having a happy/sad ending? Also, is there any truth at all in this?

    • 5 years ago

      by Michael

      Whey hey! haha a comment. I had forgot about this rambling fable. I had scene in my mind of me - the brave knight, and I knew when I was writing I would be a hero in some way. The sad part really was my brides father who had been slain by the hissing alien, and the happy side was that I took revenge ( maybe a little love story too :). Purely fantasy Mr D, but I feel in any fantasy we take part in it.
      Thanks old chap for taking the time to read this and your interest :)