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  • 7 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Hello Moses

    A unique and.....smelly sort of a write, lol.
    This actually had me cringing by the end, so detailed was your description of these horrors.
    To be honest, I have always found graveyards to be rather peaceful places but (thanks to this poem) I doubt I shall ever look at them in quite the same way again! lol

    Take care and all the very best,
    Ben

  • 7 years ago

    by Em

    Hi, this is a chillingly, good write.

    I've never really liked cemeteries' even if they are a peaceful place because of what they hold there. When I visit my boys grave I always feel so cold and chilled by them. I'd love never to go again but I must. I actually have imagined the smell of the corpses often and I can tell you it won't be nice.
    The last 2 stanzas are so powerful. We are all heading the same place unfortunately.

    All the best, Em

  • 7 years ago

    by The Po whet

    Thank you Ben and Em for your comments, and sorry for getting you a little scared but yeah I think too, it's a smelly one (lol) .Thanks.