Comments : Silent Scream

  • 7 years ago

    by Angel Tears

    Very nice flow in this piece. It was well structured and well written. Thanks for sharing

    • 7 years ago

      by Michael Morbid

      Thanks for the reply and the rating. Interesting name, by the way.

  • 7 years ago

    by Dean Kuch

    Hello, Michael.
    I may be mistaken, but isn't Digoxin used to treat congestive heart failure?
    Not a criticism in any way, I was just curious.

    "Today I reside in my plot,
    where I remain while I rot.
    Now one of my greatest fears,
    is that I'll remain beyond the years." ... Well, this unfortunate chap should look on the bright side.
    He could have been cremated.

    I think this plays quite well on a phobia many people have of not only being autopsied alive, but also to be placed in a dead-like yet completely cognizant and lucid state.
    Well done!
    ~Dean Kuch

  • 7 years ago

    by Em

    A wonderful dark write here Michael.
    I think this would be anybodies worse nightmare.

    Em