Comments : The Hunt

  • 7 years ago

    by Golden AnGel Rhapsodist

    Augustus,

    this is a nice narrative poetry. .. I like it as if I'm watching the season of the walking dead. ...It bring me some chills. .

    well done

    Gel

    • 7 years ago

      by Augustus Black

      Thank you very much, but I made this write of my own, and I was not inspired by walking dead series.

      Thanks a lot again.

  • 7 years ago

    by Golden AnGel Rhapsodist

    Oh I see. ..but this is a cool write Augustus :) nice original piece

    • 7 years ago

      by Augustus Black

      Thank you again from the profoundest part of my heart.

  • 7 years ago

    by Brenda

    Augustus, a true love story. This person loved you so much and would never hurt you. That's love my friend. Well done-

    • 7 years ago

      by Augustus Black

      Thank you very much. Ya! it's a true love. I like this poem a lot as it contains both darkness and love. I think I have grown enough to understand the true meaning of love.

  • 7 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Augustus,

    This is excellent. I was thoroughly intrigued throughout. A really original little piece that captivates and also conjures some wonderful imagery.

    I may sleep downstairs tonight...

    Take care and all the best,

    Ben

    • 7 years ago

      by Augustus Black

      Thanks a lot for the comment, Sir. I personally like this poem because it holds great sadness. The wife knew she would soon convert into zombie, so she flew away just to save her love, her husband. That's called true love.

      All the best.

      Ha!ha!Ha! ... Ya! Sir you can sleep wherever you want.

  • 7 years ago

    by Em

    Wow, very powerful and interesting throughout.
    Em

  • 7 years ago

    by Kurt

    "Melancholy seized my soul.
    Thousand times I dried my tongue
    calling her name in the wilderness.
    But it turned out to be a waste of time."

    I actually felt myself getting cotton mouth as I read this. When words can invoke physical reactions I believe I've truly stumbled upon a great piece of work. Thank you for writing this. I very thoroughly enjoyed reading it!