hehe..wow..great write..the last few lines are really good but the whole poem was simply amazing! Keep it up! And continue to write! 5outta5
Shannon

this is really good keep it up!

Very sad, you really got the emotions and message across, keep it up xxx

i love it! amazing poem!

that really hits the heart great work. i think you did a very nice job with this. keep up the good work ok. i am def. gonna have to check out your other poems. nice job. Much Luv.

Nick

some of the stuff in my poem (kill me...) is true...
but i really like this poem!!!!

omg I cried my eyes out. this is crazy crazy good. I'm still crying.

Great, I think this poem has alot to say about being persecuted for what you believe in. I am all the time, great work, I think I'll check out the rest......

wow, that was very powerful... good job.5/5
love,
~Katie~

REALLY great job! I enjoyed this poem a LOT! its brought the stores that my Grandparents tell, into a poem, keep up the good work!

I really like this one, because it is so true. You have a real talent for poetry. maybe if you gots the time, you could stop by and read my shtuff.

Eden

thank you sooo much to everyone!!!! it means a lot to me
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wow gr8 write hun xox