I love fire
fire is cool
Robert is a fool
Ed has a pool
Sarah has a rare form of desease called cardool
I am cool

The repetition and wording was great, but I just didn't like your last line and maybe it's just me ... Keep writing though, i see potential. 4/5

With all respect,
Heather.

Umm... I don't know Megan. I didn't really like it.

WTF is cardool?

-Sarah

Oh yeah. Megan, I changed the pic for our profile since our name isn't "Mortimer" anymore. I hope that's ok.

-Sarah

Cooioioioioioioio

Hellooooooooooo