THis poem was really haunting and creepy yet so interesting to read i enjoyed this poem alot it kept me facinated from start to finish. Well done on a nicely written dark poem. ~mel

One of the best poems I have ever read. It left me sppechless for like a whole minute. You did a fantasic job.10/10

You're right.
It is a poem to post.
Although...
The flow is weak.
It would be better
If you space it out a bit more.
For example:
Feeling the pressure coming over your cold flesh,
Picking at your soul and burning your every thought,
You should have it as
Feeling the pressure
coming over your cold flesh,
Picking at your soul
and burning your every thought,
It's not just a different.
It's where your readers pause.

Hey,
i really liked this poem, i thought it was dark and quite creepy. I really liked the repition youve used , especially in the secound to last line of each stana while you changes one word;
"No one can [WORD] you...
Dying in your dreams."

^ I loved that, it really helps the poem seem even more creepy and dark. The flow of the poem was great. I loved the begining of the poem, it had a great flow and your vocabulary usage was quite dark and yet very discriptive. The very last stanza... well i dont know it just doesnt seem right. i mean you have seemed to of lost all of your darkness you had in the poem. Maybe if you turned it into a question or soemthing.
"You survived these dreams...
But will you survive tonight?"

Or soemthing like that? i odnt know it just seems to of lost its creepiness, and i knwo your trying to bringe it back with "See you tonight...." but it just doesnt seem to work for me. I dont know... But stilla good read! Keep writing! xx

WOW I LOVE IT IT IS SCARY AS HELL BUT I LOVE IT I MEAN THE WHOLE TIME I WAS READIN IT I WAS PICTURING ME DYIN IN MY DREAM TRYIN TO BREATH AND WOW IT WAS SO REAL SO I LOVE IT KEEP IT UP

This was a creep poem but i really liked it! i could like see it in my mind it has a great flow! 5/5