Comments : Twinkle, Twinkle, Little Star

  • 16 years ago

    by Crystal Gaze

    Creative..
    I loved it..
    Well Done,
    Elainex

  • 16 years ago

    by Ray Blue

    Great poem. 5/5. Good imagination.

    Ray

  • 16 years ago

    by Lady C

    I love it!
    I tried to sing it and it went...pretty well, I don't really have a singingvoice...
    Anyway, love it!
    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    I love this...original and unqiue in concept and very creative.
    The repetition works well, and the imagery creates vivid pictures.
    Flow is beautiful throughout.

  • 16 years ago

    by Vanessa

    Again diffrent is good, I liked this.The word chice was amazing and the flow was perfect. The emtion was clear and strong. I think you did an excellnt job on this one. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by xxSnow Angelxx

    Awww!!.very sweet....creative!.perfectly flowed through out n the word choice was also superb!
    Kp writing!
    5/5!
    xxPoojaxx