I agree u r great writer this had an great flow keep it up

Wow this is rly good. i loved it. 5/5.

That is very pretty. It is soo out there (good way)!!! A very nice flow and a greater writer u could go somewhere w/ that talent!

Great poem! The way you expressed dark emotions with such intensity is amazing...

Choking without forgiveness,
Divinity is never truly divine.

Written with such creativity...