I loved it with a vampire's passion.
all together absolutley the best poem i've read on here so far!
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It was a deep poem, good job.

You are right Liz, this is deep and well portrayed. The wordings are great and the whole poem is 100% cohesive. Thats the best part of it. You are really a fan and a great writer of dark poems :) 5/5 all the way

This was very deep, even though the wording was simple, the flow and strength of the poem were really amazing, the portrayal of a vampire in this way was also very interesting, and it was a beautiful dark poem
5/5
gabriella

This is magnificent. I love it when poems have a story line. It makes the poem more enticing. You did a wonderful job.