Comments : Darkend Souls

  • 12 years ago

    by DeviousCharmer

    I absolutely love this poem! :D

  • 12 years ago

    by John Dlyan Boone BABY

    Wow you did great with rhyming and the story was just powerful
    amazing 5

  • 11 years ago

    by Amber

    Love it

  • 11 years ago

    by sahar alameddine

    Well done !

  • 11 years ago

    by shree

    Nice one..!

  • 11 years ago

    by WitheredRose

    I love the twist in this! The exchange of power and finally the almost "dark love story" of it all. I really enjoyed this! :)

  • 11 years ago

    by ImmortalWiccan

    Amazing I felt what the the person was feeling very good!!

  • 11 years ago

    by Dominique Lewis

    Woah this gave me chills. I love it. It was amazing to me. I though this was absolutely wonderful. I am into the dark poems so this is one of my new favorites. :) 5/5 from me <3

  • 11 years ago

    by Texas Battle

    Ouch man,your a genius

  • 10 years ago

    by Skyler Olson

    I loved this poem! Although one transition puzzled me... "....he saw right through
    My helpless disguise

    My smile made him afraid
    He thought he was in control..."

    Some were along the lines it went from being helpless to smiling. Other than that I loved This poem 5/5

  • 10 years ago

    by Thoughts unseen

    5/5
    Brought a smile to my face :)

  • 9 years ago

    by John Doe

    Absolutely mind blowing cant you literally are a god

  • 9 years ago

    by John Doe

    Absolutely mind blowing cant you literally are a god

  • 8 years ago

    by Dancing Rivers

    Ferking amaaazing!!!!

  • 6 years ago

    by Aidaly

    Hadn't been on this site in over 8 years, coming back to my favorites and this is still one of my all time favorite poems.

    • I pop on a couple times a year even though I don't write anymore, and it's nice to see people are still reading my work from when I was a child. Does make me feel old though haha! So glad it's still a favourite of yours.