Comments : On a date with death

  • 16 years ago

    by Adelle

    This poem was brilliant the title seams sinister and yet the poem has a lot of humor I really likes this piece.

  • 16 years ago

    by Catastrophic Beauty

    Excellent poem. Great use of imagery. This poem is so unique and I commend you for that. This poem was amazing. Different than any I've read before. Breathtaking and so powerful. 5/5

    -Shannon <3

  • 16 years ago

    by jLegendc

    WOW! i've never read something like this.. the way you told your story was very unique because of the way you wrote this poem.. this is one of the best poems i've ever read.. everything was detailed and very intriguing to read... wow you're good!

  • 16 years ago

    by Alexandra Jade Brewer

    That was..... so unique.... I can't find another word to describe it like that does. You don't see something like this anywhere. It was so well written and so scary all at the same time. I can't believe your use of words in this poem. So strong and make the poem really stick... You have a lot of talent keep up the work!

  • 16 years ago

    by The Pessimistic Peabody

    Wow simply amazing. Going on my favorites for sure. A wonderful dark tale, very enjoyable. It flowed majestically and the storyline sucked in my full attention. 5/5 keep up the wonderful writing

  • 16 years ago

    by FridusBlueheaven

    This poem is really really excellent job. I really love the title, the flow and this is very well worded. Another superb job by you, nothing to complain, 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by XxToWriteLoveOnHerWristxX

    Wow old poems can come back even better!! it was an amazing read and i like how you describe the setting in your poem. 5/5 !props!

  • 16 years ago

    by RobinAnn13

    Very, very good. I love it. Using death symbolically is a very good idea and you use it well. The repeated question at the beginning and end is good too. Making us think about it at first and then revealing more insight to the question and who its about as the poem goes along. 5/5 <3<3

  • 16 years ago

    by EssenceOfLace

    I LOVED THIS!!
    it makes me want to go on a date with the devil.
    how dark and demonic this poem was really appealed to me.
    the rhyming technique and wording were amazing.
    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by JEFF

    It was very dark, good write

  • 16 years ago

    by Punk Princess

    Wow that was a great poem ! Its wierd ccuz i have a friend named stephanie taylor just change the n to a t =] it was a fantastic poem !

  • 15 years ago

    by Sarah

    Chilly, lovely. Wicked poem! Written it fantastically. Great imagery. Good JoB! 5.5

  • 15 years ago

    by FlawlesslyTarnished

    Wow. Amazing. The flow was flawless and your descrptions and imagery were outstanding. .And the intensity of this piece was well and the emotions were portrayed greatly. Well written and well thought out. 5/5 indefinitely.

  • 15 years ago

    by Lonely Rider

    Loved this write ...
    very unique concept and well narrated ... i sense you have tried to explain some deep thoughts throught this write ... very dark powerful write ...

    ""Have You Ever Died?"
    With dead-serious eyes, you asked,
    With a little laugh
    To make it like you were joking.
    Yeah, you were breath-taking; "

    ^^loved the intensity in these lines...

    wonderfully penned...