Love, Hate Realtionship

by DeviousCharmer

Im feeling down , once again
so I come to you to feel better
hoping you will take my pain away
not realising or caring about how dangerous you are

my tears drop on you
along with my blood
what is done is done

although you make me feel better ,you make these scars that will never go away

I love you because you make the pain go away
I also hate you because you leave scars that make me remeber the pain
therefore our relationship is a Love , Hate Relationship



( I don't actually cut myself, just a poem I wanted to write)

 

Submission date : 2012-03-24
Last edit : 2013-06-15

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True Love Died In My Arms Yet It ( F P C D ) at 2012-03-26

It's very imagery and the emotions eh it could have gotten more emotions but good

kylah at 2012-03-26

I love it. It's an awesome poem :)

Beautifiul Disaster ( F P C D ) at 2012-03-29

I love this, :) I enjoyed reading this. it is an amazing poem!!!

Giegielove Goddess Poet ( F P C ) at 2012-04-08

Nice one .i like it! i give you 5/5

Kitty Kurse ( F P C D ) at 2012-06-09

I like how you relate this to cutting. It describes wats goin on in my life right now great!



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