Black ( acrostic )

by Baby Rainbow   Sep 19, 2012


Behind red eyes
Lurks a monstrous creature
Able to feast upon your mind,
Consume your powerless soul,
Kill you, then possess your body.

Saffie
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24/8/12

* club challenge, to write an acrostic poem using a colour*

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  • 11 years ago

    by A Poets Handwriting aka ALISHA

    I am really beginning to love acrostic poems - I have read some really good ones lately, and this is no exception.

    The darkness was in fact made even more so with the use of the word 'black' but also your words worked flawlessly to create the expression of darkness. Well done. 5/5

  • 11 years ago

    by The Poet Behind The Poems

    This is a really well written acrostic the use of black to evil is really well showed it flowed perfectly as well

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