The mystic secret of the night

by Princealexander   Oct 12, 2015


The mystic secret of the night
Embraces us and holds us tight
In its evasive grip of freak,
Which treats one's life with danger's trick.

Night wears covers of the dark,
Full of adventures to embark
On scary trip, set by the fate,
To risky pleasures we await.

We step, we dive into the night
To lose what holds us at day light,
To free dark corners of the soul,
To shut the conscience and control.

And every face looks like a mask,
Face painted by the dusk to bask.
But may be really night reveals
The truth of us, which day conceals ?

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  • 7 years ago

    by Christy Trenholm Schmall

    Love this poem It brings to light the secrets most of us may carry in the dark parts of our hearts! Good work! Love the flow, the meter & Rhyme You have talent!

  • 8 years ago

    by J Nair

    Great concept Alex. Enjoyed the poem.

    'But may be really night reveals
    The truth of us, which day conceals ?'

    Words Wonderfully portrayed the fact, that our souls the reality might be coming awake in the night when the body is at rest. It takes the nights darkness to bring out the reality of our truth which hides in the days stark light.

    Thank you.
    Jay

  • 8 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    A great poem with a lovely, flowing rhyme scheme that was a pleasure to read.
    I love the message that night reveals in us what the daytime conceals. The idea that - in the dark - people can be revealed more clearly. Clever.
    All the very best
    Ben

  • 8 years ago

    by Mr. Darcy

    Hello,

    A nice poem which holds its mystery well...

    Halloween and the act of knocking on doors donned in masks and announcing the question:Trick or Treat.

    Well done.

    Michael

  • 8 years ago

    by Princealexander

    Previously published by me ( as all other my English poetry ) on other sites under the name princeAlexander / princealexander
    First publication on 05/24/2011
    www.postpoems.org/authors/princealexander/poem/898574
    Second publication on 05/26/2011
    http://www.world-poems.net/modules/publisher/article.php?storyid=2157

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