Truth

by Broken Soul   Nov 21, 2015


If you don't know then I will tell
There's no such thing as heaven when we live in hell
The demons are alive and inside our minds
How is God here when Earth is ready to die.

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  • 8 years ago

    by Shruti

    Hello Kara,
    welcome to poems & quotes.
    A nice poem.
    In the second line, should it be "no such thing 'as' heaven" instead of 'a' heaven?
    Do correct me if I'm wrong.
    I felt some kind of sadness in this poem. Often times we feel hopeless and question His existence...and that's alright. Just know that sadness is not eternal.
    Simple poem. I like its depth. Keep writing and remember that you're not alone.
    :-)
    ~S

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