A Gothic Romance

by Iyla

Her body lay on the red velvet bed
black roses covered her bust
he hungrily stared down at her
an uncontrollable lust

he ran his hand across her body
caressing every curve, every part
he pressed his body against hers
quietly he listened to the increased beating of her heart

he ran his fingers threw her raven hair
stared deeply into her eyes
echoing threw the room
were her satisfied cries

he stared down at her soft white throat
and slowly pressed his mouth against it
he eagerly began to drink
excitedly she bit his wrist

blood covered their body's
as they slowly moved together
filling each others thirst
every minute getting better

together they lay
enter-twined as one
lost in eternal lust
a vamparic love...

 

Submission date : 2006-01-08

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Emma ( F P C D ) at 2006-01-15

I loved it. it paints a great pic. it was beauitful. great work

Emma 5/5

EmO-Ho ( F P C ) at 2006-01-15

Sweeeet

*rêve_cassé* at 2006-02-04

WOOO I LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE IT!!!!!!! keep up the awesome work chica, c ya at skewl!!!! 5/5


*♥ Angel Desari ♥* ( F P C D ) at 2006-03-15

Hey your poem was awesome and i love vampire poems and this is one of the good ones! keep it up!


Ilinca Milosan ( F P C D ) at 2006-11-23

Loved the story and imagery and wording and everything =)
5/5



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