My Final Day

by LostHopesCrimsonTears   Feb 27, 2006


Darkness
Pain
Death
Despain

Life
So cold
I cannot
Bear

Lost
Unloved
Without you
Now

Trying
Fighting
Dont know
How

Wanting
Needing
Wishing you
Here

Crying
Wondering
Hoping you
Care

Cutting
Burning
Loosing my
Self

Silent
Unseen
Nobody to
Help

Fading
Seeping
Blood pours
Out

Confused
Hurting
Filled with
Doubt

Falling
Feeling
Life slipping
Away

Reaching
Greeting
My final
Day

Copyright©2006 Amanda Hope Indelicato

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  • 18 years ago

    by master of shadow

    This is brilliant, i'm not usually keen on poems made of really short lines like this, but in this case it is really effective.

    5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by J Lau

    Nicely done! Though the poem is quite sad, I do like the way you layed it out and experimented with the non-traditional styles. I wrote a couple of poems in similar styles... "Feelings of a year" and "Dinner is served". Keep writing... great work!

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