Comments : In a dream

  • 15 years ago

    by charles

    That would be a nightmare. No wonder you're afraid to sleep/ dream. Still, was well written. Liked the flow

  • 15 years ago

    by xxXCrazyXNeonXGurlXxx

    Wow very good i had a dreams almost like that one night it was really scary i woke up crying my eyes out the even wrost part was i didnt eve know who they guy was who was doing it.

    ~~Amanda~~<3

  • 15 years ago

    by Tina Marie

    Beautiful poem <333 but i am so sorry this had to happen to u

  • 15 years ago

    by 0oAshleyo0

    This is an amazing poem. and im praying that it isnt true to you. im so sorry if this had to happen to you, because i know the same pain.

  • 15 years ago

    by CanUKissAwayMyPain

    Oh.. wow.. what a nightmare...!!! im sorry..
    but very nicly writen.. =) good job..

  • 15 years ago

    by Yeka

    Darkness...i feel your pain dude don't worry but dude great poem love it...you know that yo'll never be the only one k....

  • 14 years ago

    by KemistryKia

    Sad...
    deep....
    loved it!!!!
    keep writing

  • 14 years ago

    by AnCi

    An amazing poem! It is really sad to read though!