Comments : May I Have Your Attention, Please.

  • 14 years ago

    by Lethmelodis

    Inspirational and strong =D

    Also got to praise you on the rhyme scheme you used. I have trouble linking 3+ lines together with the same rhyme effectively like you did. Like, when I do it, it feels forced (at least to me).

    Good job though. Got to love political writes :)