Wow, I'm so sorry that happened to your friend. But the poem was really good.. Keep writing.. I like how the words flow so nicely. 5-5..

I am sorry to hear about your friend its a sad story i lost someone to suicide and i knwo what its like. if u wouod like to talk my email; is Fes_sk8er31@hotmail.com

this is so good. .very pwerful.. sent chills up my spine.. im sorry that sadistic bast..ard took her away.. i im sorry youre dealing with this leftove rpain.. stay strong..

I am so sorry your friend had to go through something like that. It almost brought tears to my eyes reading that...everyday I face the fear of that happening to me. I am afraid of my uncle...I try to keep telling my parents that he's no good that he should move out...they just dont listen..I hope she pulls through and stays strong. Great poem. It's cool that you can write something that emotional and have it not even happen to you. Some people try to do that and it just comes out wrong. I applaud you. >3jess

thats horrible, not the poem but the experience. lv A, x

omg your such an awesome writer! I love your work. another excellent job! >3jess