by Jennifer
I feel the same way...i hate my dad good luck with everything...:) great poem |
by Megann Lee
I like this poem, it's very meaningful and packs a rather good point..Flow and rythym is right on. Great Job. |
by Meggie33
Ahhh that poem was sad, in the beginning i wasnt sure what it was getting too, but then u said dad and it instantly connected, i have a real bad relationship with my dad too so i can relate! good job! |
by Jessica
Nice way of expressing your feelings.. there was alot of emotion in this poem and it was shining through loud and clear! lots of imagery also, very nice poem! 5/5 |
Hey thats good keep at it im just starting at this hole thing well i realy did like it u should check my poems out to and see wut you think |