Comments : Fucked up

  • 17 years ago

    by Jennifer

    I feel the same way...i hate my dad good luck with everything...:) great poem

  • 17 years ago

    by Megann Lee

    I like this poem, it's very meaningful and packs a rather good point..Flow and rythym is right on. Great Job.

  • 17 years ago

    by Meggie33

    Ahhh that poem was sad, in the beginning i wasnt sure what it was getting too, but then u said dad and it instantly connected, i have a real bad relationship with my dad too so i can relate! good job!

    **meggie**

  • 17 years ago

    by Jessica

    Nice way of expressing your feelings.. there was alot of emotion in this poem and it was shining through loud and clear! lots of imagery also, very nice poem! 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by NEZ D O DOUBLE G

    Hey thats good keep at it im just starting at this hole thing well i realy did like it u should check my poems out to and see wut you think