Great poem lots of emotion and spirit thanks for the comment

keenan

Awww!!! this is nice!!!!
i loved it!!!!!
take care!!!!!
5/5
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Sweet with a twist .....loved it! really nice job!
i wouldnt change anything about this poem.

5/5

Hey this is one good poem and the twist was good..
keep up the gr8 writes...it had nice flow and rhyming
keep it up
bree