That is soo well written and so realistic...well it obviously did happen which is terrible. The emotion put in it was unbelievable and the flow was perfect. Great work. Xx Chrissie

Hei great poem,,,the anger was obvious,,,so sory to hear what hapened, good job still,,

It seems so real...it felt like i was there watching a movie or something...i give it a 100 out of 5..hope to read more of your fantastic poems and sorry to hear about your friend..hope she's okay...

*tears*...actually i'm not crying but it was sad enough to bring them...but in the same instance beautiful...i loved it...i loved how it flowed and there wasn't unneeded interuptions...i also loved the story becasue it's something that happens all too often...beatiful work
Jonda Beth

Very well written..
Completely awed by it.
I love the first paragraph.
I hope your friend is okay. =[

I like this poem.It has so much sadness.

Omg I love this poem Im sorry for your friend Ya i have that Problem I made How I Wish for a friend. man this is deep i like this a lot. great poem 5/5

Amazing poem.
i despise men who only are out to 'score'.
im sorry if this has happened to you in reality.
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-Kelliey

The way u hav written this poem is very good. keep up the good work.. & i feel 4 ur friend..
.x

Wow...I really liked this poem...Good Writting...Sorry about what happened..This was very powerful though...

Great poem!! awesome flow and so realistic loved it 5/5
-Michelle

Aww it was so good

OMG IM CRYING RIGHT NOW I CANT BELIEVE THIS IM SO SAD I REALLY LOVE THIS POEM I REALLY CAN FEEL THE PAIN AND I CANT BELIEVE YOUR BACK!!!IM SO HAPPY I REALLY NEED SOME MOTIVATION TO WRITE A NEW POEM AND YOU INSPIRE ME!!

That is sooo sad

It gave me goosebumps...such a sad reality..beautifully written.

Wow-this is so stark with such brutal undertones. Very sad and shocking. You have really created a tragic story here that reflects on the cruelty and selfishness of some people. Very thought-provoking and well written. Haunting, it really stays with you....

Peace, Poetry & Power,

Gary Jurechka

A can completely relate to this poem it has happened to someone really close to me && a know they will never get over what has happened!

Very well written && oh so true!

Keep up thee good work && keep writting=] x

The emotion in this poem was just amazing and the fact that it truely did happen makes it all that much more powerful...beautifully written as well...niice job!

Brooke<3

That was good... be really interesting to see a version where you developed the characters more - the first four lines really invite a little more about the guy. and i'd change 'sneaky' to something more sinister. Will defo read more of your stuff.

Great writing indeed, you are sucha great friend for writing this. Unfortunately, this goes on way too much across the world. But your poem was brilliantly written. Timothy r