a broken smile with a broken hea ( F P C D )
at 2008-10-03
Ok what?? it was funny but confusing. so you wanted to write a poem, but your t.v died and then you got tired and retired? hahaha that's cute..
some of it didn't make sense at all and the way you just connected all this elements around you for a laugh.. it was nice i guess that's what made the poem cute and funny..
**Ada**
*aBSwaBHiaPL*
Juanita
at 2009-01-24
I loved it! Very well written it gave me a laugh. Which was exactly what I was looking for. Thanks!
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