Cara ( F P C D )
at 2009-02-19
Exceellenntt, just what i needed, a workout for my tongue lol.
It was fabulous :]
Give your all, when you fall, you'll still stand tall.
^^ Jeeeezzz. i had trouble to begin with, with that one lol.
Really great write Ingrid, its true, if we stand tall, believe in ourselves, we will get far :]
Very inspirational write Ingrid.
The flow was good, the wording was great and i loved it.
Very well done! :]
5/5
Lonely Rider ( F P C D )
at 2009-02-19
Wow... very cleverly written ...
differnt from your other writes..
enjoyed reading it :)
Nema ( F P C D )
at 2009-02-19
*WEEEE*
See the love I have for this piece??? =P haha.
I truly loved it my great Ingrid.
You penned it beautifully..I'm impressed !
I can't pick my fave lines..they're all dazzling..and someone dizzying, lol
Loved it
Love you
Keep writing !
Sylvia ( F P C D )
at 2009-02-19
I am tried and out of breath after reading this. It flows well and I found myself reading faster and faster through each line. It is a different style for you but I really like it. Now I feel like running and that I can do anything I dare. Good job. 5/5
kelleyana ( F P C D )
at 2009-02-20
Waw i love this, it makes makes me smile. It's the first time i've ever red a written in this form. Well done, 5/5, kel.
kelleyana ( F P C D )
at 2009-02-20
Waw i love this, it makes makes me smile. It's the first time i've ever red a written in this form. Well done, 5/5, kel.
soso ( F C D )
at 2009-02-21
Hey Ingrid,
I can't help but smiling (^_^)
What a different smart read from you dear lady...
I believe that your poetic skills knows no limits.
I heard about this form but never read any before this one, glad it was from you.
Very beautiful.
T e m p s ( F P C D )
at 2009-02-21
Uhm, you gave me a headache lol. Wow, you dont see tongue twisters wrote that often around here.. I`m glad to see someone was brave enough to take up such a difficult challenge and in the end come out victorious. This piece was definatly a tongue twister but flowed well while holding a meaning.
5/5.
John Long ( F P C )
at 2009-02-22
This is a fast flowing stream of consciousness both physical and cerebral. Very modern and risk taking. Nice to see that you aren't afraid to write in different forms. Well done.
Devina
at 2009-09-28
Its excellent, but I don't think its tounge twisting.. hehehe.. good job though^^
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