Kiko ( F C )
at 2009-06-09
This is very cute and kept me interested, practically riveted, the whole way through.
You are a great talent.
Colm ( F P C D )
at 2009-07-19
This was bizarre at times but was good for being so. It was a really entertaining read, your imagination is wonderful. It made me smile, which not many poems can do, well done
Colm