MelodyAnn ( F P C D )
at 2009-09-06
This no only made me smile but I'm really hungry now lol
Very cute I loved it
T e m p s ( F P C D )
at 2009-09-06
Aww this is so cute. It made me smile. Everything pink and beautiful. Only in dreams would the world look this beautiful & tasty. (:
Cindy ( F P C D )
at 2009-09-08
C. Bliss
What a awesome dream :) A place we would all love to go and stay. A place away from all the heartache and pain of life.
Excellent job!
Take Care
Cindy
Meena Krish ( F P C D )
at 2009-09-09
Yes dream is the only place where none can
come & there is always joy..a world where
there is peace..a happy write with a touch of
sadness..take care.
Emma Wallis ( F P C D )
at 2009-09-17
I really enjoyed this. How our dreams run away with us ... Such a wonderful picture to paint. Lovely piece. Brought a smile to my face, 5/5. Em x
gerard T ( F P C )
at 2009-09-19
I ve got to give you 5/5 for that, not as much for the style but for the indigestion. I was reading and i was eating ! lol
billy rob ( F P C D )
at 2009-09-23
"This is what the small girl dreams of.
When she is alone in her room.
About this pink town which has no sadness.
Where colorful flowers constantly bloom."
How very delightful this was. I loved it. I thought it was an excellent, funfilled fantasy poem. You have quite an imagination, my friend...Well done, indeed. Billy Rob
dreamofolwin ( F P C D )
at 2009-09-24
I absolutely loved reading this. A wonderful write :) All sugary and spice! ... like little girls. You did awesome here. Great imagery.... great flow... a great poem! Fantastic :)
groovydude ( F P C )
at 2009-09-29
Very nice, a strawberry fields forever type of feel. what a wonderful dream.
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